Sunday, November 18, 2018

One shot to get it right


how do I tell you,
that i even care,
when you’re not listening,
as if you’re not even there
how do I explain how I really feel,
when you’re taking me around on a the roundabout wheel?
no lies,
no love,
a mountain full of tears,
and a sky full of doves,
i can tell the stories,
it ain’t getting me nowhere,
made the effort,
the ice age cometh i fear.

Whitesnakes do it better ...................... when ya ready n willing

12 comments:

KB said...

Love the emotion in this babe and the pic is beautiful xxxx

One Shot peeps are gonna think we coordinated our poems again but we never do. Must just be in sink.

Whitesnake said...

that was suppose ta sync not sink!
Bugga down the drain again!

Monkey Man said...

So well described...that cold shoulder.

moondustwriter said...

I love that you are in sync with KB
boy that would be a chilly ice age
the silent person in my poem would feel right at home

Thanks WS for the Shot

Moon smiles

hedgewitch said...

I liked this--it reminds me of cowboys around a campfire telling tall tales but not telling everything. I've been taken for a few rides myself on the roundabout wheel...

Someone is Special said...

well described..

--Someone is Special--

Bubba said...

The warmth of Love's fire will hold back the cold, even if there's only glowing coals.

(A little hot breath and the right fuel can help the fire grow)

Nice One Shot, Whitesnake!

Claudia said...

..that i even care,
when you’re not listening...
was the line that grabbed me most..this speaks volumes..

Shashidhar Sharma said...

Hi
Beautiful words... I enjoyed it so much...
'a mountain full of tears,
and a sky full of doves,'
Thanks for sharing..


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Carrie Van Horn said...

Been throught that ice age already...you captured that experience perfectly in your poem...a wonderful one shot Whitesnake!

PattiKen said...

This is great. I've been kind of focused on male-female communications lately, and this was playing a familiar tune.

Marshy said...

great oneshot...felt that...keep sharing...cheers pete

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