Sunday, May 17, 2009

Disconnected

why are you screaming?
about the past,
there were good times,
just didn’t last,
run for cover,
choice words selected,
twisted around,
so disconnected.

mind gone crazy,
when it burst the bubble,
another whiskey,
mine’s a double,
false accusations,
have been detected,
truth in your life
been disconnected.


Steve Boddey May 2009

11 comments:

paisley said...

for as long as everyone sees everything from their own perspective we will remain disconnected.....

Buffalo said...

Ain't bad, mate. Good job.

George S Batty said...

That reached right and bit me in the
.......have a another double for me.
This poetry I can relate to. good write

Americanising Desi said...

i agree with paisley :)

Happy SS

http://whenhekissesher.wordpress.com/2009/05/16/disconnected/

Marja said...

Great work Steve

danni said...

not always any choice, is there? - such a complicated place to be!!!

keith said...

Great mate especially the bit about whiskey!

Tumblewords: said...

Valid points, vibrantly written!

awareness said...

whiskey certainly helps with the disconnect! perhaps it connects us to something else?

floreta said...

an all too true tale.

when the musics over said...

Nothing like a double red-eye after a fruitless argument. Here's mud in yer eye.........

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