Without giving a reason why,
Try to understand you but they can’t do,
That’s the hardest part.
Love is emotion, like the ocean,
Waves crashing upon a broken heart,
Hurting now, well so am I.
Hate and anger,
Rise above all the love you have,
Makes no difference, no change is forever,
Done all the talking,
But there is no listening,
I’m tried of asking why,
Two separate paths we travel,
That’s why this is goodbye
Whitesnakes do it better .........................
15 comments:
Sometimes the best thing you can say is goodbye xxxx
dont say good bye...though i agree sometimes it is best...especially in the face of such roiling emotions...nice one shot!
Relatable, admirable/mature work.
Sometimes, it takes much wisdom and courage to say goodbye. Nice one shot.
You left room in the spaces for us to write the story. Pity I like to know the story but I'm just greedy. Better poem if you leave the spaces for the story changes with every reader. Hope the resolution is harmonious. Thanks Gay @beachanny
This one hits hard because the goodbye in this case has a finality.
It is beautifully penned as a hard reality
Thanks my friend
I love when Poetry hits the target dead on
moon smiles
but i just said hello!
Sometimes, it's the only thing left to say.
Why two separate path we travel... why this goodbye... liked it and your words comparing love to ocean is good one.. thanks for sharing this.. I liked it so much...
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Sad, but truth in your words.
Perhaps, another year, a later date, the final goodbye will be less hurtful
Wysteria
so very true and so very well written.....a great poem for one shot...just as long as you arent saying goodbye to oneshot..cheers pete
So many goodbye's--heh?
Lots of insight in your words.
Victoria
It feels so real... great One Shot!
Sometimes, goodbye is the only thing left to say. Very well written.
Goodbye can be the hardest thing ever to say, but also the one word most needed to re-start a life again.
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