Sunday, November 18, 2018

One shot too many



how do I tell you what I’m feeling.
when you never understand the why
tried explaining,
its like water mixed with wine,
no sense at all.

sunsets at dawn,
rainbows after the sunshine,
rain without the raindrops,
arriving after one departs,
no one hears the call.

the blind man seeing,
a deaf man hearing,
dumb man talking,
love is emotion,
no one see’s it fall.

it’s all emotion,
can’t make you realise,
where i been where i’m going,
you just don’t know,
i’ll just continue down the hall..

Whitesnakes do it better ...................... With Love an Affection



19 comments:

KB said...

Happy Birthday Babe. Love your One Shot but the pic is rather distracting, even for me...LOL!

signed...bkm said...

Really nice piece on emotion...yes it is invisible..but so powerful...bkm

Carrie Van Horn said...

Whitesnake this is truly a powerful poem...one of my favorites of yours! :-)

Teresa said...

Emotion truly is powerful! Love the poem.

moondustwriter said...

Whitesnake:
this is a keeper. Love your pondering on love and the beauty of emotion - there is no end to the reflection

A fine One Shot

thanks form the Moon

moondustwriter said...

Happy Birthday my friend
time to celebrate with your sweetie

Monkey Man said...

Great feeling into this. And I guess a happy birthday is also in order.

PattiKen said...

This is really good, very poignant.

Hope you had a very happy birthday.

Anita Magdalena said...

Nicely written and expressed.

Anita.


http://anitaseroticpoetry.blogspot.com/2008/05/tattoo-me.html

Anonymous said...

Love sure is one hellva strong emotion!!
Well expressed, Whitesnake!!

And now... Wish you many many many Happy Returns of the day!! Have a wonderful time!!! :)

One Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and Artists said...

happy birthday...pete

Kodjo Deynoo said...

And thus love is without rational..nice oneshot

dustus said...

Well stated, Whitesnake. I especially like the lines that follow the introduction of nonsense (sunsets at dawn, / rainbows after the sunshine, / rain without the raindrops,) It all has a very nice ring it it. Cheers

hedgewitch said...

Carrying away from this an image of both complication and undivided effort to be understood amidst the contradictions. As good a definition of love as any. Nice piece.

Bubba said...

Nice shot, Whitesnake!

Steve Isaak said...

Smart, emotionally true work.

Maureen said...

Good one!

Those last lines linger: "where i been where i'm going, / you just don't know, /i'll just continue down the hall."

Maude Lynn said...

Nicely done! Happy Birthday, Whitesnake!

Shashidhar Sharma said...

I liked the poetry and the ending was so perfect.. I will just continue down the hall... beautiful.


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