Wednesday, February 13, 2019

Paint a Picture





In my head I paint a picture
Of what I see in you,
Watch you grow from childhood.
Watched everything you do.
In my head I paint a picture,
I see it in my mind
I have to paint the pictures,
From birth I have been blind.

Whitesnakes do it better ........Always


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24 comments:

Rinkly Rimes said...

Only a few words but you painted a very realistic, and sad, picture. The illustration caught the theme perfectly.

KB said...

This is excellent babe xxxx

Nanka said...

The power in this poem just pierced a hole in my heart.Excellent!!

Anna :o] said...

A sad picture indeed - yet beautifully painted.

Anna :o]

Marja said...

A great poem I wonder if people who have been blind all their life have any idea of how the world looks like.

Marja said...

A great poem I wonder if people who have been blind all their life have any idea of how the world looks like.

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

This is fun, love the creative thoughts ...

Katherine said...
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Katherine said...

Beautiful write Whitesnake .. It reminded me of a story I watched on TV on Sunday evening. Jack Thompson, a very well known Australian actor, went back to Cambodia where he helped to build an orphanage for children who'd been orphaned by war. When he arrived at the orphanage 20 years later, Jack entered playing the same song on his harmonica that he had played to the boy 20 years earlier & the boy (now a man) remembered....running straight into his arms. A beautiful moment!

Kodjo Deynoo said...

In deed you did paint a picture with excellence

Medhini said...

I didnt read ur post till now...but my take was something similar!! Nice one Whitesnakes....

Mike Patrick said...

The twist, in the last stanze, that isn't a twist to so many. Very well done.

Jess PJ said...

Nicely done. The ending surprised me.

nara malone said...

Sad but masterful twist at the end. :)

WyomingDiva said...

Liked it!

Unknown said...

That's awesome, it went a different way than I thought but I love where it went!

Raine said...

I feel this person's plight. Wow!

KB said...

I could lend you my glasses babe xxxx

Whitesnake said...

KB Oh I see! xxxx

Susie Clevenger said...

Clever writing

Sanaa Rizvi said...

Brilliant write!

brudberg said...

We are so filled with pictures... sometimes they block us from what's real... but every once in a while it becomes reality

Priscilla King said...

It's an interesting image...blinded by the need to think in pictures? I've read that people born blind grow up thinking in terms of "seeing" with their fingers. Some, or all of them? No idea.

Whitesnake said...

Thank you all for thy pearls of wisdom.

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