sunlight, sunshine,
a dark side of me,
a sadness creeps in,
tears falling like rain,
still remains,
a power, a pleasure,
a rose that’s in bloom.
a smile in the heart,
a break in the soul,
a light you had shined,
dies in the night,
love never fades,
i’m always still here,
like the sun every day.
17 comments:
My love for you never fades babe xxxx
This is like commenting on a private, intimate emotion. And it's lovely.
...ahh...and the sun keeps on shining...nice love ballad..
Sunshine is always a remedy for soul doubts..love it whitesnakes..cheers! :)
Reminds me of an old song, Theres always the sun... enjoyed your poem xo
Half-way through wasn't expecting the poem to go thematically where it ended uplifting. Glad for that, and think you did a fine job, whitesnake.
This reads like a song. So glad the sun shines on you.
Just an aside... It's so interesting to read your entry and KB's back to back. Sometimes, it feels like a poetic conversation.
I like how you come full round to stay in the light.
not much more I can say that all of these lovely people have said. I agree with all of them!
thank you for sharing
What a nice poem about the constancy of love.
It was perfect to read yours, Dear Whitesnake just after KB's ... what a beautiful conversation you have and you both have shared... I liked it so much...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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shashi is spot on...reading one straight after the other really made the power of this piece stand out more...great share..cheers pete
wonderful write...having read your other half last night it rings with intimacy and depentdable...why does the sun rise...it just does...smiles.
Nice, romantic One Shot!
and what could be more loyal and faithful than the sun? :)
Lovely
Nails the definition of love. Effective, relatable.
Romantic piece... love the line more... faithful than the sun. nice.
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