strained love,
no more communication,
nigh on a year,
been breaking the soul,
there’s no sign,
of the never ending heartache,
see how it hurts,
all up in the air.
flying high,
to get pass the viper,
wings cut,
by the angel standing by,
standoff,
father time has his moment,
leaving them all,
a state of despair.
hot wind,
blows from the mouth of fools,
one feels,
the time has arrived,
a world spins,
while the dream is put together,
a tower of gold,
heading straight for the sky.
all eyes,
reaching out for the ending,
circles squared,
as it falls to the ground,
is it far?
there’s blood on the sand,
as flight takes a fall,
yet we believe!
no more communication,
nigh on a year,
been breaking the soul,
there’s no sign,
of the never ending heartache,
see how it hurts,
all up in the air.
flying high,
to get pass the viper,
wings cut,
by the angel standing by,
standoff,
father time has his moment,
leaving them all,
a state of despair.
hot wind,
blows from the mouth of fools,
one feels,
the time has arrived,
a world spins,
while the dream is put together,
a tower of gold,
heading straight for the sky.
all eyes,
reaching out for the ending,
circles squared,
as it falls to the ground,
is it far?
there’s blood on the sand,
as flight takes a fall,
yet we believe!
Whitesnakes do it better ..............with a slip of the tongue!
10 comments:
wow white snake...some incredible imagery here...all very visual....blood in the sand....
Powerful piece, Whitesnake. It's a good thing we can hold on to our optimism despite all evidence, or the human race would come to a screeching halt.
can feel the strain and hear the tail spin
thanks for the One Shot White Snake
Moonie Smiles
Whitesnake...
You had great inspiration this week, and it shines through here..Great One Shot...G
I see you and KB had similar inspiration, but diffrerent takes. Nice One Shot, Whitesnake!
Great one shot Whitesnake! :-)
This was well written and the words were nicely executed.
Cheers!
Very nice.. I enjoyed the play of your words and the end.. thanks for sharing...
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tense...enjoyable..and very powerful..a great one shot..cheers pete
thanz for sharing the picture s and info i enjoyed it
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