tempt, temptation,
no thought at all,
expectation,
before a fall,
see you laughing,
feel you near,
reach out wanting,
without no fear.
clouded rainbows,
mix all the shades
panic strikes
with speech it fades.
thirty days,
and thirty nights,
rain or shine
faded nights.
trinkets bought,
worn on the go,
ah! coffee,
i prefer coco!
Whitesnakes do it better....with a slip of the tongue,,,,,,,,!
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Flash Fiction - Each Friday, compose a short story or other dribble of 55 words - no more, no less... or else bits of you will fall off. Post your crap to the slave driver G-Man. If you're not interested in contributing anything not even a comment feel free to Bugga off somewhere else.
27 comments:
Thats what I'm talkin about Brother
Most excellent Job.
I'll take it even though it's not Friday yet. But look at it this way, Your First!
Thanks for this early 55, and have a Kick Ass Week-End.....G
Nicely done! I especially liked your jab about the slave driver :)
Perfect 55.
nice...i tend to like coffee myself...and i felt the yearning and then the rain...nice 55.
mine is up!
Very nice 55. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on mine.
PG
Coffee...COFFEE! It even cures snakebites, if used in proper quantities (and concoctions)!
Good '55'...and you claim it's your FIRST? Yeah. Right.
i'll take the coco!
Glad you rose to the challenge taunt of the slave driver :)
Great 55!
Oooo watch out for them whitesnakes.
What a taunting 55
Happy Friday
moonsmiles
Cocoa is good for rainy days, but coffee's the best on any day. Nice 55, Mr. Snake.
this is beautiful!
How could you not love COCO!
xxxx
a good coffee is tempting indeed..smiles
a good coffee is tempting indeed..smiles
Coffee? Cocoa? Make mine a tea!
Great 55
Nicely done cofee...
Let She Stay In Peace
--Someone Is Special--
Mrs. MM like a Mocha - best of both worlds. Love the dig at G. Great 55, WS.
Very well done my friend. I really enjoyed this...I prefer Mountain Dew :) Have a great Friday and wonderful 55 :)
Make mine a good strong French dark roast coffee....to go with that great 55. I never even heard of a whitesnake. I'm from Georgia, originally. We have our share of water mocassins ( I'm from the Chattahoochee River area ), even some rattlers, and coral snakes.
coco for a change, not bad,
love the word flow.
animated and fun 55.
mine is here
Very sharp. I wish I could think of a better word. I mean sharp. Like a razor. Very good.
Mine's here. http://faystoo.blogspot.com/2010/09/its-time-to-play-write-story-in-55_17.html
I enjoyed your 55 for its own merit...
But the bits at the end describing the 55 and our host - that was pure gold. :)
-C
I think I need to go make some coffee now! Great 55!
THAT is one commendable "dribble" of 55 words, WhiteSnake!! Juat had my coffee, mught go wild and make anotehr cup.
Oooo, 55s are sooooo much fun.
xo
('cause I'm an xo type of blogger.)
the slave driver demands
but whitesnake commands
words and rhymes
his own way
a pint at night
and coco for the day ...
cheers!
JP
Nice BUT coffee first, then cocoa at hockey games :-)
I liked the form of this. Being from Seattle, I'd have to choose java. ;) Love the last line (was a huge Whitesnake fan back in the day).
enjoyed reading this! felt like a plastic bag being wafted along the street.
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