Wednesday, December 22, 2010

Whitesnakes Last One Shot

autumn fall,
summer rain,
reaching out.
to catch the rainbow,
calm comes again.

This one is for you darling!
soft and warm,
hear the voice,
calm the dark,
whispered words,
all by choice.

we believe,
life’s not a wheel,
come the dawn,
love breaks,
the chains of steel.

Whitesnakes do it better ...............in One Shot!
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10 comments:

KB said...

It's beautiful babe xxxx

moondustwriter said...

Love in the right setting sure does - glad you have found it.
Wish we all as fortunate


hope that title doesn't mean Last as in Last

Love and hugs to the both of you and wishing you wonderful holidays

Maureen said...

Sometimes the last is the best.

Merry Christmas!

dustus said...

Love breaking chains of steel... well said, Sir. I echo Leslie's comment. I hope this is not your last OS literally :(

Merry Christmas!

DeLi said...

i like the rhytm, short and concise and sweet.

happy holidays!

Bubba said...

A sweet One Shot.

One Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and Artists said...

a wonderful write...even i felt the love this week with my own poem...and as moonie & dustus ask i hope the title is just a title and not your last?

thanks for sharing and have a great christmas..all the best pete

Steve Isaak said...

Great flow and word choices. Effective work.

Anonymous said...

Lovely! Very much enjoyed. :)

The Pepperrific Life said...

Seems like a simple poem, but it does say a lot. Yes, I also believe that love breaks chains of steel...well, at least I'd like to think so :)

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