summer rain,
reaching out.
to catch the rainbow,
calm comes again.
This one is for you darling! |
hear the voice,
calm the dark,
whispered words,
all by choice.
we believe,
life’s not a wheel,
come the dawn,
love breaks,
the chains of steel.
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10 comments:
It's beautiful babe xxxx
Love in the right setting sure does - glad you have found it.
Wish we all as fortunate
hope that title doesn't mean Last as in Last
Love and hugs to the both of you and wishing you wonderful holidays
Sometimes the last is the best.
Merry Christmas!
Love breaking chains of steel... well said, Sir. I echo Leslie's comment. I hope this is not your last OS literally :(
Merry Christmas!
i like the rhytm, short and concise and sweet.
happy holidays!
A sweet One Shot.
a wonderful write...even i felt the love this week with my own poem...and as moonie & dustus ask i hope the title is just a title and not your last?
thanks for sharing and have a great christmas..all the best pete
Great flow and word choices. Effective work.
Lovely! Very much enjoyed. :)
Seems like a simple poem, but it does say a lot. Yes, I also believe that love breaks chains of steel...well, at least I'd like to think so :)
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