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Sunday, November 18, 2018

One shot too many



how do I tell you what I’m feeling.
when you never understand the why
tried explaining,
its like water mixed with wine,
no sense at all.

sunsets at dawn,
rainbows after the sunshine,
rain without the raindrops,
arriving after one departs,
no one hears the call.

the blind man seeing,
a deaf man hearing,
dumb man talking,
love is emotion,
no one see’s it fall.

it’s all emotion,
can’t make you realise,
where i been where i’m going,
you just don’t know,
i’ll just continue down the hall..

Whitesnakes do it better ...................... With Love an Affection



19 comments:

  1. Happy Birthday Babe. Love your One Shot but the pic is rather distracting, even for me...LOL!

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  2. Really nice piece on emotion...yes it is invisible..but so powerful...bkm

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  3. Whitesnake this is truly a powerful poem...one of my favorites of yours! :-)

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  4. Emotion truly is powerful! Love the poem.

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  5. Whitesnake:
    this is a keeper. Love your pondering on love and the beauty of emotion - there is no end to the reflection

    A fine One Shot

    thanks form the Moon

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  6. Happy Birthday my friend
    time to celebrate with your sweetie

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  7. Great feeling into this. And I guess a happy birthday is also in order.

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  8. This is really good, very poignant.

    Hope you had a very happy birthday.

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  9. Nicely written and expressed.

    Anita.


    http://anitaseroticpoetry.blogspot.com/2008/05/tattoo-me.html

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  10. Love sure is one hellva strong emotion!!
    Well expressed, Whitesnake!!

    And now... Wish you many many many Happy Returns of the day!! Have a wonderful time!!! :)

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  11. And thus love is without rational..nice oneshot

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  12. Well stated, Whitesnake. I especially like the lines that follow the introduction of nonsense (sunsets at dawn, / rainbows after the sunshine, / rain without the raindrops,) It all has a very nice ring it it. Cheers

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  13. Carrying away from this an image of both complication and undivided effort to be understood amidst the contradictions. As good a definition of love as any. Nice piece.

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  14. Good one!

    Those last lines linger: "where i been where i'm going, / you just don't know, /i'll just continue down the hall."

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  15. Nicely done! Happy Birthday, Whitesnake!

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  16. I liked the poetry and the ending was so perfect.. I will just continue down the hall... beautiful.


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Who says 9-5 is normal? I bet Dracula doesn't think that!