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Wednesday, September 15, 2010

OK a 55........ Taunt of the G-Man

tempt, temptation,
no thought at all,
expectation,
before a fall,
see you laughing,
feel you near,
reach out wanting,
without no fear.
clouded rainbows,
mix all the shades
panic strikes
with speech it fades.
thirty days,
and thirty nights,
rain or shine
faded nights.
trinkets bought,
worn on the go,
ah! coffee,
i prefer coco!
Whitesnakes do it better....with a slip of the tongue,,,,,,,,!
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Flash Fiction - Each Friday,  compose a short story or other dribble of 55 words - no more, no less... or else bits of you will fall off. Post your crap to the slave driver G-Man. If you're not interested in contributing anything not even a comment  feel free to Bugga off somewhere else.
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27 comments:

  1. G-ManSeptember 16, 2010 at 11:11 AM

    Thats what I'm talkin about Brother
    Most excellent Job.
    I'll take it even though it's not Friday yet. But look at it this way, Your First!
    Thanks for this early 55, and have a Kick Ass Week-End.....G

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2010 at 12:18 PM

    Nicely done! I especially liked your jab about the slave driver :)

    Perfect 55.

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  3. Brian MillerSeptember 17, 2010 at 12:27 PM

    nice...i tend to like coffee myself...and i felt the yearning and then the rain...nice 55.

    mine is up!

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  4. One Prayer GirlSeptember 17, 2010 at 2:47 PM

    Very nice 55. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on mine.

    PG

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  5. steveroniSeptember 17, 2010 at 3:28 PM

    Coffee...COFFEE! It even cures snakebites, if used in proper quantities (and concoctions)!

    Good '55'...and you claim it's your FIRST? Yeah. Right.

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  6. limeSeptember 17, 2010 at 3:31 PM

    i'll take the coco!

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  7. TALONSeptember 17, 2010 at 3:34 PM

    Glad you rose to the challenge taunt of the slave driver :)

    Great 55!

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  8. moondustwriterSeptember 17, 2010 at 3:46 PM

    Oooo watch out for them whitesnakes.
    What a taunting 55

    Happy Friday

    moonsmiles

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  9. PattiKenSeptember 17, 2010 at 3:53 PM

    Cocoa is good for rainy days, but coffee's the best on any day. Nice 55, Mr. Snake.

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  10. magiceyeSeptember 17, 2010 at 4:08 PM

    this is beautiful!

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  11. KBSeptember 17, 2010 at 4:24 PM

    How could you not love COCO!

    xxxx

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  12. ClaudiaSeptember 17, 2010 at 10:42 PM

    a good coffee is tempting indeed..smiles

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  13. ClaudiaSeptember 17, 2010 at 10:42 PM

    a good coffee is tempting indeed..smiles

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  14. MorningAJSeptember 17, 2010 at 10:59 PM

    Coffee? Cocoa? Make mine a tea!
    Great 55

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  15. Someone is SpecialSeptember 18, 2010 at 1:52 AM

    Nicely done cofee...

    Let She Stay In Peace

    --Someone Is Special--

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  16. Monkey ManSeptember 18, 2010 at 5:19 AM

    Mrs. MM like a Mocha - best of both worlds. Love the dig at G. Great 55, WS.

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  17. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2010 at 5:56 AM

    Very well done my friend. I really enjoyed this...I prefer Mountain Dew :) Have a great Friday and wonderful 55 :)

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  18. RNSANESeptember 18, 2010 at 8:59 AM

    Make mine a good strong French dark roast coffee....to go with that great 55. I never even heard of a whitesnake. I'm from Georgia, originally. We have our share of water mocassins ( I'm from the Chattahoochee River area ), even some rattlers, and coral snakes.

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  19. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallSeptember 18, 2010 at 12:32 PM

    coco for a change, not bad,
    love the word flow.
    animated and fun 55.

    mine is here

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  20. Fay CampbellSeptember 18, 2010 at 1:18 PM

    Very sharp. I wish I could think of a better word. I mean sharp. Like a razor. Very good.
    Mine's here. http://faystoo.blogspot.com/2010/09/its-time-to-play-write-story-in-55_17.html

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  21. MeSeptember 18, 2010 at 2:19 PM

    I enjoyed your 55 for its own merit...

    But the bits at the end describing the 55 and our host - that was pure gold. :)
    -C

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  22. TeresaSeptember 18, 2010 at 3:27 PM

    I think I need to go make some coffee now! Great 55!

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  23. Jannie FunsterSeptember 20, 2010 at 2:52 AM

    THAT is one commendable "dribble" of 55 words, WhiteSnake!! Juat had my coffee, mught go wild and make anotehr cup.

    Oooo, 55s are sooooo much fun.

    xo

    ('cause I'm an xo type of blogger.)

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  24. JanePoet/debSeptember 21, 2010 at 10:17 AM

    the slave driver demands
    but whitesnake commands
    words and rhymes
    his own way
    a pint at night
    and coco for the day ...

    cheers!
    JP

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  25. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2011 at 5:34 PM

    Nice BUT coffee first, then cocoa at hockey games :-)

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  26. Dragon KatetFebruary 23, 2011 at 7:12 PM

    I liked the form of this. Being from Seattle, I'd have to choose java. ;) Love the last line (was a huge Whitesnake fan back in the day).

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  27. AnonymousFebruary 25, 2011 at 10:56 PM

    enjoyed reading this! felt like a plastic bag being wafted along the street.

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